prizms *POTD 12-17-06*
Prizms My love for you whispers on the breeze to bring a gentle smile within the eyes that captivate me, mesmerize me, as my heart beats, skips, then dances as if hoisted by feathers. The winds of...
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Gosh, I'd love to feel like this everyday! You've captured it perfectly!
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when I was a tadpole I listened to a song over and over until the record became so thin it became inaudible...the main lyrics went like this... mommy left my daddy but I won't cry hold my prism to my...
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Hi Laura, Such beauty and elegance in your lines. You paint the visuals with delicate brushstrokes. Magnificent when viewed from various angles, much like a dazzling prism. Excellente! Lit with Kick!
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All this love.. and said in awesome hues. A true pleasure to read, Laura._________________________________________________ Musann All New All Metal ! The FieldsPoetry like you like! ...Read More
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Quote:My love for you whispers on the breeze to bring a gentle smile within the eyes that captivate me, mesmerize me, as my heart beats, skips, then dances as if hoisted by feathers. If that isn't the...
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This reminded me of a poem I wrote "Prism Trail"..only it was a little sad, this is joyful..casting loves light. Enjoyed the read Indigo, Hugs Sky
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Love pure and simple. How well you captured feelings in verse with this write, Laura! I enjoyed the read thoroughly! Thank you for sharing! Donna
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love the imagery of prisms; light refracted... very well-done! thanque for sharing tuck
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This is so beautiful, it brings the smiles you describe so eloquently just to read it, much less experience the love you write of.
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~sigh~ so soft and beautiful dear poetess ~sigh~ Congratulation for the award!
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Quote:My love for you whispers on the breeze to bring a gentle smile within the eyes that captivate me, mesmerize me, as my heart beats, skips, then dances as if hoisted by feathers. lil sis this is...
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I actually read this when first posted, but let myself procrastinate in my commenting. "A rainbow cast like light through prisms beckons this heart to smile on those darkest days as your soul kisses...
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thanks everyone for all the wonderful comments and reads! it's good to be in the place I am these days *grinz* Well except for the fact school is a pain! thanks for the award on this one too,...
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